You have a lot of research analysis but MUST include pics and links to illustrate your points and you need a WORKING links to go with Batman trailer analysis- preferably one that works in school such as IMDB not Youtube.
You need pics of cast/characters, props and locations and a bit more explanation/analysis of your planning choices and their use.
How will you make your final title choice and are you going to do any audience research into this and the style of fonts you're contemplating to find out if they appeal to your target demographic?
You've got a lot of good info here but need to incorporate illustrations and some audience research to fully explain and justify your choices.
